Hollow
And empty
Like a mere shell
With no existing core
{As in myself}
I yearn to feel
Something
Anything
Even if it must be
The harshest pain
I would rather be aware
That I'm still alive
Then fell as if
I'm the walking dead.
So please
I'm begging you
Hit me with your best
{And most effective}
Shot.
Author notes
6- Emptiness is the feeling of wanting yourself to feel when it won't let you
*PanickedOutxPoet =D
A contest entry
- 10 quotes to inspire you contest by Hikari Lady.
700 points, ended December 27, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wow!! I liked this, gives a scary feeling of emptiness. You took the prompt clearly and put it into a wonderful poem.
Thanks for entering and good luck!
~Noor
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