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Shadows

Shadows move within my soul
  Like mist upon the dew

Remembering times now lost
Haunting visions still of you

Coldness works within my heart
Feelings frozen still in time

Wishing for the summer sun
Back when love was mine

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  • Cynthia Gaines
    December 15, 2008
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    Perfect Title...

    This is a wonderful poem!!! I don't know how I missed out on reading this one before, as I'm always drawn to poems about Shadows. Perfect rhyme, too... I'm wishing you all the best, John!! Thank you for sharing your heart-and-soul-felt poem with all of us, and keep it flowing... & always, xx Cyn xx


  • Dante Rayvenhart
    December 10, 2008

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    Very good. I like short poems but I'm afraid this one just doesn't quite grab me... Thank you for taking the time to enter though.

    ~Lae, Feu Tempete


  • Sandygram silver member
    December 9, 2008
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    Hello John, Your words always speak from the heart and touch me in some way. I guess becausre of the sadness we both seekm to feel within. Thank you for sharing this lovely heartfelt poem. Have a wonderful day my friend. Take care.

    Blessings and Love,
    Sandy