revolving
evolving
unmasking
__confusion__
Author notes
profound thought
A contest entry
- 4 Words That Go Beyond The Surface, AGAIN by lunarlunacy.
400 points, ended December 25, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I can so see this the unmasking of the human condition. Our evolution. nice one!
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I like the flow of this and the choice of words. It makes me think of it as a metaphor. Like, how things in life can change and when some things in life finally reveal themselves, it can create shock in life and people may not know what to think. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
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oooh i like the way this one rolls off the tongue and around the brain.
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Great take for the prompt. And it eludes well to the pretzle twists and turns the answers evolve in.
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YEP profound thoughts indeed, good luck in the contest
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