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I Looked At It And Then Wrote Something

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Water-colored pictorials hide abatement;
(I still think A Dog's Life is overrated.)
acknowledged in accents of presented portrait. 

 

 

Something seeps beneath. Yet all is not obscure.

Doomed caricature figurines are found for certain. 

(I wonder, whatever-is-their-purpose?) 

 

Foreground fears its own vivid colors. 

Background remains too deep for shadows.

 

Ante up against sanity with observation

and a thousand different interpretations

or be silent and simply enjoy the artistry.  

 

 

Author notes

Painting is by Wassily Kandinksy.
The name is Improvisation.

A contest entry

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  • JinSays gold member
    December 13, 2008

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    amen
    couldnt have said it better myself.
    Excellent entry, than you.
    Love,
    Jin


  • Kari gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    I agree with you about it being overrated. That's for sure! Sometimes I wish that things where obscure. Is it good when we know or when we don't know...idk...
    Hugs


  • Alyzeh
    December 9, 2008

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    Beautiful words for a beautiful painting. Very well written. Good luck to you in the contest.

    Much love
    Alyzeh


  • geckogirl silver member
    December 9, 2008
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    You captured the art ... Cheers