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Call it What You Will

The black maw,
Deep,
Devoid of all,
Without memory or time,
Many times it has swallowed me,
Always I fall,
Whether by my hand or aided,
The result is the same,
This endless cycle of death,
To have all I love,
Ripped away from me,
I will not fall,
I walk the tight rope,
Trying to reach the other side,
I can't do this alone anymore.

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  • Desire gold member
    December 8, 2008
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    Wow~

    Oh My this tugs hard Sweet One
    Powerful Voice and message also emotions that reach deep~ I wish You nothing but Happiness and Prosperity~

    This one swells the eyes
    I want to hug You harder
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~