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(o)- + A kilo of cocaine and millions
of dollars in settlement money can turn...
-=O
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(0)-(0)| In the blink of an eye.
Your luck can change, but the past is always
a review-mirror away from you looking on to
better ways to break your neck.
Author notes
Written February 7th, 2004
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A contest entry
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Very original...i like the lines at the end. Thank you for sharing this...I loved the form. Good luck in the contest.
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i knew you were a drug dealer
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huh,, your stuff is really weird, I don't like it. Oh well you win some, you lose some.
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And that's why we're supposed to learn from the past. Isn't it?
Although I do like Jenneddin's comment best.
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My neck is oh so sloppy... from this bobbing up and down on the worlds dick of greed.......
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Nice
Very true. Are you a Taoist? Anyway, nice little inserpt, here.
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