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The Beggar



Tired eyes

seek life.

 

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4 words


You know the those people who you pass in the street, without even a glance in their direction? Yeah that's is what I'm talking about. One human asking another to become human.

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What to do in an insane world?

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  • alreadygone2009
    December 8, 2008
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    Very good. I love this. Seems stolen from forlorn truth.
    Good luck!
    *HS*


  • just weak hands
    December 8, 2008

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    oh i definitely love this one ! it has so much meaning packed into just four short words. i think that would be an excellent addition to the fan blades.

    great job and best of luck !


  • lunarlunacy
    December 8, 2008

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    well said, a painful truth lies above. one i have endured personally and one i do what i can to help alleviate when I encounter it in others today. i applaud your sentiment and intent here. I think every human fortuanate to have a home and family should have to work one day in a homeless shelter to get a taste of what some of those souls experience whether by choice or circumstance.
    hugs
    Adrian.


  • Angelflower
    December 8, 2008

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    that was a really good use of 4 words.. you did a wonderful job. Best of luck in the contest.

    Angel