Tired eyes
seek life.
Author notes
4 words
You know the those people who you pass in the street, without even a glance in their direction? Yeah that's is what I'm talking about. One human asking another to become human.
A contest entry
- 4 Words That Go Beyond The Surface, AGAIN by lunarlunacy.
400 points, ended December 25, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
Comments
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Very good. I love this. Seems stolen from forlorn truth.
Good luck!
*HS*
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oh i definitely love this one ! it has so much meaning packed into just four short words. i think that would be an excellent addition to the fan blades.
great job and best of luck !
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well said, a painful truth lies above. one i have endured personally and one i do what i can to help alleviate when I encounter it in others today. i applaud your sentiment and intent here. I think every human fortuanate to have a home and family should have to work one day in a homeless shelter to get a taste of what some of those souls experience whether by choice or circumstance.
hugs
Adrian.
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that was a really good use of 4 words.. you did a wonderful job. Best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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