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Baby Boy

In Mother's arms
with tired eyes,
a little Angel,
big surprise.

He quietly sleeps,
sweet lullaby,
when he wakes
a touching cry.

A special gift
from God above,
a baby boy
so full of love.

With little fingers
and tiny toes,
he also has his
Daddy's nose.

A bundle of joy
warm and true,
shows the love
God has for you.

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"Luke's so cute"

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  • Mrs D
    December 10, 2008
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    reallly sweet .......smooth melodius rhyme.....
    .....best of luck .....


  • Alyzeh
    December 9, 2008

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    Awwww..this is so beautiful! I had a smile on my face while I read this.. Stunning write. You're winning the Gold on this one for sure. Good luck!

    Much love
    Alyzeh


  • JustFallingApart
    December 8, 2008

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    This is so wonderful and perfect! I absolutely love it, it's exactly what I want for my contest. I thank you for entering. Best of luck, you've done a lovely job on this and hope all is well.