counting down with Advent chocolate
candles flicker, and the cards are posted ready to go
Christmas tree is decorated to perfection
i hope the world will cover itself in a warm blanket of snow
with the help of our spirit may all you miracles come true
all the children getting ready for santa meetings
and those giving and recieving gifts too
so to all those celebrating, seasons greetings!
A contest entry
- December New Members Contest - Holiday Edition by AP Greeters.
6000 points, ended January 6, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Christmas Through Your Eyes by go away..
550 points, ended December 31, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Hello sauceygal,
I didnt see the option you picked in your authors comments. I think that Christmas is def a joy to celebrate and what kid doesnt believe in Santa? I think that innocents and faith is what makes being a kid so amazing.
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I think for a shorter piece, this really envelops a lot of the spirit of the holidays. I can almost paint the scene in my mind, reminding me of a classic Christmas scene.
Good luck in the contest.
Storm
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Very lovely images you have here, making for great memories.
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Shawna
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Hello, sauceygal;
This would make a nice 'caption' to a Christmas card or picture. Very soft and sweet
Oopsies:
of our spirit may all [you] miracles come true- You meant 'your'
'received' is misspelled.
Thank you for entering!
Warmly, CookieZeal
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Welcome to Allpoetry and thank you for entering the contest
This is gorgeous. I love the wish for a blanket of Snow. Where I live (Australia) it's Summer, so we don't get that!
Welcome to Allpoetry and thank you for entering our contest
I hope that you enjoy the site, and if you have any questions please don't hesitate to ask
Good luck!
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I think all kids love their Advent calendars every year, I know my niece does ~
This is a great little poem of hope, fun and Christmas cheer ~
You have forgotten to put the option used in the Authors Notes Please do so as it would be a shame for this to be removed from the contest. If you are unsure how to do this, please do not hesitate to ask a Greeter ~
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Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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Lovely A well written, enjoyable poem.
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this is a great snapshot at the holidays, you need to put what option number you used for the contest in your notes section, if you need help with this just give me a shout,
good luck in the contest and happy holidays
cheers
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Oh! Advent calendars! One of my favorite traditions, one that I just had to pass on to my son. You did well with this and you have brought back some lovely memories for me.
Don't forget you will need to add your option number in your author's notes. If you have any questions just let us know.
Best of luck to you!
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This is sweet and definitely has a Christmas atmosphere to it. "itself" is one word Good luck in the contest and happy holydays 
~Diana
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I love advent calendars and chocolates this is a beautiful Christmas poem and I love the imagery that you have used - sometimes I wish that it would snow here for Christmas too
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Hi, sauceygal
This is wonderful and, with a little bit of cleaning-up, it could definitely be worthy of Hallmark fame
Well done, and a very happy Christmas to you!
Welcome aboard!
Laura
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again.. fit to be in a greeting card Lovely poem.. Thank you for taking time to enter our contest.. Good luck with the same..
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Hi sauceygal
This has such a great homey feelin to it i love the background too thank you for entering good luck in the contest Merry Christmas
Barbara
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A nice write with a warm message. A couple of suggestions though, I think that adding some punctuation to this write may help certain parts stand out more. I also noticed a couple of spelling mistakes. Thanks for sharing, best of luck in the contest.
Sarah
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