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Horror Show (pretty long) (DISTURBED CONTENT)

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EXTREME WARNING: THIS CONTAINS GRAPHIC GORE/VIOLENCE, GRAPHIC HORROR, AND A RAPE SCENE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED. THIS IS STRICTLY FOR A CONTEST

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The room that seated the audience was large, around 1,000 chairs which quickly seemed to fill with eager viewers. The sound of laughter erupted from children as they ran around their parents, excitement over-taking them. Cotten candy and popcorn seemed to fill the hands of tired parents as they struggled to contain their kids and get them settled in. Despite the friendly atmosphere, a dark shadow seemed to loom above the stage, some trying to push aside the dread and fear that seemed to follow.

Besides, what was there to fear? This was indeed a carnival. Lions leaping through blazing hoops, tight-rope walkers juggling bowling pins and of course clowns!

The crowd settled down and all became quiet as a spot-light fell upon the stage. A man walked out and took a bow.

"Lady's and Gentlemen! Welcome to the Carnival Show! We hope you enjoy your visit and let the games begin!" The man's voice boomed through the speakers lining the walls and his eye's flashed, or was that a trick? Though no one seemed to notice.....

no one noticed that look of evil in his sunken, black eye's. The announcer was dressed as a magician, a black trench coat draped over his thin body. On the top half of his face, he wore a white mask, similar to the Phantom of the Opera look. His fingers were long claws.....just an act or so the audience had assumed. He began to fade, his body disintigrating before the eye's of shocked viewers. Everyone gasped in sheer amazement and then the room was filled with clapping.

'How did he do that?? How was he able to disspear like that?' came the hushed responses. Suddenly, everyone grew quiet as a large black sheet fell down on the back wall.

A low growl chilled the flesh and made hair stand on end. The sound of raking claws on metal bars echoed as the beast clawed at it's cage though hidden from curious eye's. With a loud bang the door was opened and a black panther leapt through the thin sheet, ripping it to shreads as it gracefully landed on stage in front of the audience, massive paws leaving an imprint. It's muscles rippled, it's fangs bared and panic seemed to sweep the crowd. Strobe lights had been placed above the stage and began to wildly flash as the cat dropped to the floor in a pouncing position, ready to rip the throat out of the first person it landed on. Before the creature leapt forth, a mono-tone chant was spoken through a micro-phone, seeming to calm the panther. It purred, it's fangs still bared yet no longer in an aggressive position. As fast as the man had dissappeared, he re-appread, petting his demon's head.

He laughed: an evil, hissing sound that terrified the small children. Some began to cry, seeming to anger the man in the trench coat.

"SILENCE.....or I'LL SLIT YOUR CHILDREN'S THROATS....." he growled. The parents, suddenly driven by intense terror, tried to quiet there kids, some having trouble.

"COME FORTH MY FAMILY!" the man shouted and then began his mono-tone chant. The surrounding doors in the building began to dead bolt and lock, a clicking sound that sweapt the building in waves.

"i said, COME FORTH!" A long, loud howl seemed to go on forever as the panther began to change shape. Fur began to grow and the ears started to change. The snout grew long and the senses enhanced as the creature grew into a pack mentalitiy. A wolf mentality with a hunger for blood. It stood tall, it's legs thin with large paws. He was a beauty, a master hunter serving a more powerful being then himself. It lifted it's head in another chilling howl as it's master raised his arms.

The man let out another little laugh and began to howl as well, calling the rest of his family. Wolves began to surround them and dive into the crowed, surrounding the audience for the kill. As if hearding deer, they circled their victims, awaiting their masters command. The black wolf stayed by the man's side, watching his face intently.

"I shall choose someone from the crowd.....and they shall be my victim! Welcome to my HORROR SHOW!" A grin spread across the man's face, a grin of peer evil as his serpant eye's scanned the crowd. He smiled at the smell of urine and couldn't help but enjoy the sent. Ahhh yess, the scent of FEAR!
Finally, her zeroed in on a woman, her body beautiful and causing him an erection.

"Ha ha ha, oohhhhh the perfect humiliation," he growled out-loud. His eye's began to burn red which he transferred to the black wolf. With a snarl, it leapt off the stage and ran straight for the woman of his choice. She screamed and leapt from her chair, running for her life in impulsive panic. The heavy weight of the wolf landed upon her, knocking her off her feet. She attempted to protect her vital areas as the beast latched onto her arm. Violently, it ripped and dragged her towards the stage, the evil and lust for her body evident in it's eye's. It's master's transference.

"Nooo! please, NO! I HAVE CHILDREN! I HAVE A FAMILY," she screamed through tears but to no avail. Her kids were screaming but as they started for their mother, they were knocked flat by on of the pack members, the canine hesitating on mauling the kid.

Finally, the woman was placed on the stage, the audience herded back to their seats by the wolves on the floor. The man waited until everyone was seated, some bleeding from bite marks and others in shock.

The man pointed a black wand at the floor and a matress appreared, shackles on all four corners. He drew a knife and held it to her throat, whispering in her ear: "If you try to fight me, i will slit your throat, but it will not kill you.....my 'friend' will have that honor, and you will be eaten alive, do we have an agreement?"

She nodded, oh what fear and horror she emmitted and forgetting the crowd, he forced her on the bed. He shackled her and then started up a camera, which he pointed at the mattress. The camera was set above the woman and shown on a big screen tv the size of a movie theatre's so the crowd could view every detail and every look on that whore's face. He humiliated her into the microphone so the audience could hear every word he mumbled to the bitch. After slicing her clothes off, he began to lick her thighs, growling as he did so.

"This turns you on you filthy, little whore! Your flesh is amazing and you taste beautiful," he growled, chuckling as she began shuddering. He grunted loudly and his partner leapt forward, the wolf's jaws clamping down on the woman's throat. Her body became rigid with fear, the feel of his teeth grazing her jugular.

"The more you move, the tighter his grip will get. He will chew through your neck for hours until you die!" The man laughed and then began to suck her nipples, his fingers and hand between her legs. He rubbed her clit, working fast as her hips pushed up against him, the canine's jaws tightning. She began to gurggle and gasp as her windpipe started to close.

"that is such a beautiful sound!! The sound of DEATH!"
he laughed as he brought the microphone to her mouth, the gurggling echoe'ing through the room.

"The death rattles are the most haunting, that 'woosh' of air as the body dies! It is amazing, and you are such a beauty you little fucking bitch. I want to gut your body and fuck every one of you wounds you nasty CUNT!"

He lowered his face between her legs, his tongue working her towars another orgasm, causing the wolf's jaws to close tighter. Finally, he couldn't wait any longer and he entered her, the big screen catching every thrust as she began dripping on the stage. As if lovers, their bodies intwined and he raised his knife, thrusting it through her belly. It sunk as she attempted to scream, thrusting against her binds as her wrists were cut. Slowly, he dragged the blade down, opening up her pathetic corpse. Her flesh peeled from bone and intestines slipped out upon the floor. Her screams were cut short as her throat was torn. Her arties were severed and blood spewed from the wolf's jaws and onto the walls and floor. Her heart beat slowed as her windpipe was crushed and ripped in half. The man carved into her breasts, slicing off her nipples and skinning her live. Finally, she lay still and the man placed the microphone against her mouth for that last, haunting gurggle as all life and soul escaped the carcass.

HE LAUGHED, the room dead silent.

"WELCOME TO MY CARNIVAL SHOW! NOW KILL!!!!!!! KILL THE MOTHER-FUCKERS! KILL THEM ALL! I WANT NO SURVIVORS!" Came the man's scream. As he spoke, his voice changed and grew deeper than any normal person. Souls spoke through his vocal chords, a voice from the depths of hell. The depths of the darkest shadows and as if possessed, the wolves went to work, creating the biggest blood-bath of the century.

Women, men, and children were violently disembowled on the spot, their throats torn as the cause of death. Intestines were strewn across the floor, the walls spattered with globs of flesh, blood, and gore. Scream died down as vocal chords were severed, bones crushed and shattered.

A little girl crawled beneath a seat, only 4 years old. She rocked back and forth, clutching her teddy bear, his name? Teddy. Her thumb disappeared inside her mouth as she watched her mother dragged to the ground and her throat torn as another wolf ripped her belly open. She screamed in her final moments, her eye's meeting her little girls. 'I love you,' was all she could muster as she bled to death. The girl's father put up a good fight, breaking one of the canines jaws but in the end, was held to the ground, his throat exposed for the kill as flesh was torn from bone.

A'las, the maulings stopped as everyone laid dead. The creatures began to disintegrate and dissappear in mid-air. The man let out one last howl as he too floated back to the hell with which they came from.

There was only one survivor......Cassie, only 4 years old.

"What happened hear?" One of the detectives asked.
The child looked at him blankly, in shock, then she laughed.
A girlish little giggle.

"Ring-around-the-rosie....."

"Ashes to ashes.....
Dust to dust...."

One last laugh,
"Welcome to the carnival!"

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  • Xxcant runxX
    September 18
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    Shivers great job

  • Wow, my name is Cassie... wow... this was inspiring and disgusting and amazing and a lot more but it was amazing and great and everything inbetween.


  • soccerchick89
    December 18, 2008

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    Wow!I absoulty Love this poem.I can Acutally picture what the guy looked like.
    ♥Sara♥


  • Lady Voldemort silver member
    December 13, 2008
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    Honey, you don't pluralize with apostrophes. Just thought you should know.


  • badnovocaine
    December 11, 2008

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    OH THIS IS GOOD!
    You should write a book, I would definitely buy one
    Good luck in the contest


  • skyviewexpress
    December 11, 2008
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    Hot && repulsive. lol. Nice work.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    Wow! This is sooo different for you! Love it! The whole thing had me gripped, the imagery is superb! Certainly sent a shiver down my spine. It was like when you watch a movie and you want to look away but don't in case you miss something...lol. Awesome work hunni! Good luck in the contest


  • Fenrir Rising
    December 8, 2008

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    PERFECTION!

    Simply, truly amazing, great from the first opening lines to the last, this was a great job.

    The rape was a little much for me but it helped build a great scene of death and destruction for the reader to enjoy, you did a very wonderful job.

    I really don't know what else to say, this is so horrify'n, so well done, words cannot express my feelings towards this, i wish i could give more applauds then i can


  • Myth Of Twilight
    December 8, 2008

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    beautiful absolutly beautiful i love it love it every word had me on the edge of my seet wantingm more this story was unlike ay other i have read in awile i loved this and so meany queshtons come up from it great work


    • Synthetic-Nightmare
      December 8, 2008
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      LOL

      THANKS SO MUCH! ^_^
      actually, this was a challenge. I kind of felt like i was going no-where when writing it, so isn't as good as a lot of my other stuff but

      *shrugs*

      it didn't come out THAT bad i suppose. It's not all that exciting :/

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