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Snow Boots


When the reign of love comes to steal
The war of beasts and hollowed lands
On edges of blades and feather's flight
Toppling structures of magnificent stature
Understating the obvious audacity
Stepping on seasons with snow boots





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  • Draig aine gold member
    December 10, 2008
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    very droll

    I liked it very much sort of a sigh and a chuckle


  • WordsAndWits
    December 9, 2008

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    Short and sweet. Very nice. The imagery is lovely! I love this part: "Understating the obvious audacity" It has a nice ring to it. Great job on this!!


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    December 8, 2008

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    Excellent

    A very fine write, indeed. You have expressed your thoughts quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us.