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Hidden Away

Hidden in the night
Away from prying eyes
I hide my heart in shadows
So no one may see the imperfections it holds

Hidden in the dark
Away from grouping hands
I hide my hear in shadows
So no one else may throw it away

Hidden in the inky blackness
Away from attentive ears
I hide my heart in shadows
So no one may know how the beat is so fragile

Hidden away
From the curious
My heart is only mine

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Word Prompt
Word: Shadow

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  • Lae Fyrestorme
    December 10, 2008
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    Excellent. I like the last few lines. Thanks for entering ^^

    ~Lae, Feu Tempete