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Standstill

Time stopped
when the last grain
in the hourglass fell.




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10 words, prompt - small.

A contest entry

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  • Lavender Butterfly
    December 9, 2008
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    creatively gripping... x


  • ariazephyrzoe gold member
    December 8, 2008

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    amazing!!!

    a minute spec in a sec of a minute

    I hope you win this! Goodluck
    Nice to see you writing back


    Anna Lee




  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    December 8, 2008

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    great imagery and metaphor! I really like your take on the prompt

    good luck


  • Alyzeh
    December 8, 2008

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    Sweet.

    This was pretty amazing. Good luck in the contest.

    Alyzeh