a thousand eyes light the sky
mine shall fade within your eyes
sunset caresses twilight in brevity
gaze thee now upon my sanity
hazed in wisps of misty light
your breath alone shall reign
amidst clouds vaporous delight
Rose red in visual ecstasy
tonight my love you bloom for me
screams echo of mere forplay
touching the kiss of dark display
rippled in crested tides of doom
hearts collide within a swoon
much more this night will allow
for only you my sanguine doll
barriers lay but in mortal time
a puppet master preens sublime
young robust flesh is mine to own
strings I pull from flesh and bone
a tempest to fate shan’t be free
I can not let your carnage be
tonight your repose shall sate my lips
my words are but a passing gift
as love lingers euphoric evermore
Ce soir nous dansons mon amour
Author notes
"She ricochets and you don't notice"
A contest entry
- Sadistic Intent by Synthetic-Nightmare.
1200 points, ended January 6, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Fantastic!!!
Wonderfully dark & strangely enticing...
Your use of wordplay/choice/use was sublime & flow impecable...
Another impressive piece...
Well done!!!
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WOW!
This is amazing and very, very deep. You have painted quite the chilling picture wiht the vivid imagery. You are truly a talented poet, thanks so much for your entry! good luck hun
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shivers
my words are but a passing gift
as love lingers euphoric evermore
Ce soir nous dansons mon amour
lightning bolts my dear friend
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this is so up my street, it speaks much of style in epics, and has a nature untoward, it deserves to be highly reccomended. well done
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