why would you love me?
i smell like an ashtray
i never got you a bouquet
i'm not one to obey
all my jokes are cliche
i drink everyday
you know i'm essay
why would you love me?
i like to make you mad
i can't tell when your sad
all my habits are bad
most the guys i've had
i dress like a lad
am i just a fad?
why would you love me?
i got in this for a screw
i don't like your tattoo
i don't agree with your views
when i drink i spew
taking care of myself, i don't do
maybe i just don't know you
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just curious...
why me?
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Whether you are "bad" or "good" or whatever hardly matters so much as how you feel about it. If you are unhappy, change. You can't control how other people think and view you. You can choose how you do though. I can say that you are a beautiful person that makes beautiful art through poetry, but whether or not it means anything is based on you and how you view.
I like the poem. I like how vulnerable it is, even though the words are a little harsh x
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thank you for the flattery even though it doesn't become me.
and i am glad you though it was harsh, that is how i love to do it.
thanks for your thoughts, and thanks for the applause.
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You are you, nothing more can be said and that is truth, i have asked that of one person after another why me, people who are around us by they own will seem to see something that we ourselves can't, so i think of it this way, you are you, that is why, keep it flowing
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You are a good person deep down on the inside, and guys just have to look long enough to see that part of you
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i don't think your right but we could fight about that for hours.
:'(
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