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my fear

i am scared of you
not your fault
nothing you sought

you haven't done anything
i haven't been hit by you
but have been hit non the less

i think of what has happened
what could happen
and your temper...

are you a wolf in hiding?
am i a girl in with only
a red hood to protect me?

it's not far to you, the way i judge
it's not far to me, the i have to

broken bones?
busted nose?

will you through me down?
will you pounce now?

if i told you i hated you out of spite
would you rap those soft hands
around my skinny neck?
if i told you it was yours i was carrying
would you use those strong arms
to throw me to the ground?

even if not
i can't stop the thought

so sorry if you scare me
so just don't hurt me

Author notes

i was reminded of my past over the weekend.
and the overwhelming fear that it could happen again
is eat me alive.

have you felt this?

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 8, 2008

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    well i have one thing to say you have a good life now, and i don't see that happening again, and plus you have your man and at that time you were not friends with a guy who drive an ice cream truck at night and has a special place to hide the bodies, keep it flowing


  • Cube
    December 8, 2008

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    Some grammer errors threw me off here and there. THe past is the past, and the saying that history repeats itself I believe is only true in rare ocassions.