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Used to be

It used to be so easy
It used to be fun

But now its hard
But now I can't breath

I love her so
I love her forever

But it doesn't feel
But I don't think she does

I wish I knew
I wish I could find out

Will we last forever
Will we always be happy

Baby please don't leave
Baby please try and see

I maybe clingy
I maybe strange

But I can't be anything else
But this is just me

I love her
And I know that for sure

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Its the truth

the truth is all I want

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  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    December 8, 2008

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    Aw.... That's so touching...
    It's nice to know something for sure- even if it's something no-one else seems to want to hear.

    Excellent work!


  • LovesPlayToy
    December 8, 2008
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    this is a great poem... but on the knowing will the relationship work out.. only time can telll