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Accept Me When I Fail {Wedding Vows}



I know not the purity of life
nor the happiness Ur heart seek
though, I know ‘tis you
that I take as my wife
to accept me when I fail
when my horrific attitudes
come down on you as hard as hail
& adore 2gether
the defaults of life
the pleasant memories
& darkness of our nights




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  • Soft-Rain
    December 8, 2008

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    WOW!

    Not sure what to make of this one but i do understand it...strangely enough!
    Very good my friend!


    • theburninglegend silver member
      December 8, 2008
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      DEAR FRIEND

      Thank you, I have tried for a long to let the words I dared not utter come out, but like a mute i stumble over words that have no meaning, and finally I have achieved and dared to say the words that have sat inside my warm heart forever. Thanks for the read