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With Intimate Pleasure


Dark secrets hidden within
the cloud of sorrows
Happiness is what I long for,
even if I have to borrow
I am down, & my miseries
are my only friend
My horrors in my brain
they are ingrained
The torment I preciously
endured is my only one friend
A scratch in my heart
with a blood spilled
On my body it flows,
and in my eyes it stained
My childhood memories of poverty
I cultivate and treasure
& all of the tales above,
I take on with intimate pleasure




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  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    Some quite dark emotions here, very well put. Quite sad in places I thought. Thank you for entering and good luck


  • Soft-Rain
    December 8, 2008

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    Amazing!!!!!!!

    This was truely amazing, one of your best works!
    I am in Awe! Deeply written i can feel the emotions you have put in it.

    Hugs
    ~Lisa~


    • theburninglegend silver member
      December 8, 2008
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      Lisa

      Once again, it is a pleasure to have you as my reader because it encourages me to write and mingle some more with my emotions. It took some guts to get this out and penned it down as you see it now. I appreciate your support and I wish you the best and if you ever need some1 to talk to, I am here for you friend.

      Theburninglegend