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Be Glad For Hope


Shattered not my dreams
for hope in me overwhelms
the fate that I path;
purposely unscathed.

Incompletely done or not,
fullness runs the aftermath
of this lifetime.  In me, tasked
to stay along the righteous track.

Carriage; fragility of own self
invoked in my personal shelf
the eagerness to reign
and yet the care shall remain.

Forever comes in difference
of every courage and confidence
to embrace the reality of life;
be glad, victory comes after the strife.

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  • charmander13
    December 8, 2008

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    This is a really nice poem, and I especially liked this part-
    "Forever comes in difference
    of every courage and confidence
    to embrace the reality of life"

    -great job!

    Thank you for your entry and all the best to you.