makes me feel
when there should
be none
words spoken
just for fun
aware of actions
not yet taken
deep down feelings
woken and shaken
reality reached
across the miles
visions of lust
brought huge smiles
one touch of lips
we did but feel
a tango in sheets
now all too real
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Adultery in Rhyme
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A contest entry
- Adultery In Rhyme by piccola.
700 points, ended December 12, 2008, 11 entries
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how lovely
makes it sound oh so sweet!
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Beautiful.. Such a sweet rhyme... Best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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go see Australia .... I almost made love to the screen LOL. either they used a body double or he's built!
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No body double for him... he is built!!! Gotta love a guy who is just "BUILT" lol On my list to go see over the Christmas break.
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It's a wonderful movie. Just one warning; it is a bit long. The story is great and the scenery is wonderful. I highly recommend it. Only one word of profanity, and there is a sensual scene but it was beautifully done.
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thoughts first, then dwelt upon, bring the actions. So if we are married we need to dismiss thoughts of lust. Of course I had some the other night when we went to see Australia. Hugh Jackman without his shirt (fans self) dismiss! dismiss! LOL
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Hugh Jackman... now there is one that would make you forget marriage vows! he is HOT!!!
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Good write Juls
Good luck with the contest. one touch of lips we did but feel...mmmmmmmmm
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Thanks for reading, nice of you to stop by
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Hmmm rhyming woman??? Will wonders never cease lol C
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