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Alas for me

Come and step into my head
When I jump off this damn bridge
If I made you mad today
Would you simply let it lie?

Will you please stay with me?
Will you come with me to see?
Will you love me tomorrow, please?
Or will you say that you don't care?

Come and step into my head
Will you please stay with me?
When I jump off this damn bridge
Will you come with me to see?
If I made you mad today
Will you love me tomorrow?
Would you simply let it lie?
Or will you say that you don't care?

Then I will just be standing there,
Screaming in despair,
Wondering why I can't get air,
So good night my love, this must be fair.



Author notes

I feel like being sorry for myself. These won't get read for some time anyway, I will probably be over it before then and delete it. Alas for me is all that can be said. I doubt there will be any pity over this, I just can't see the point and I ran out of pages in my sad little journal, so if you happen to glance at this it sucks to be you and you should have looked away by now. The one before this was better. I am debating whether to delete it as well.

Have fun.

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  • Luthien Luinwe
    December 9, 2008
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    If you made me mad, I would always forgive you. I will always love you! Very intersting form, I really enjoyed it. Don't delete it. Besides we all have our moments. I'm always here for you, even if I can't always read your poems asap cuz internet here sucks! Call me hun whenever!

  • Girlinred
    December 8, 2008

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    I still read all your writings, this journal sounds like fun? Still here I promise. You shouldn't delete these two, I like them. It amazes me how you can be so lonely. I do like your weird idea of form though. It seems to fit just right.