its pretty fucked,
that we used to be bestfriends, used to laugh and sing, used to spend all day on the phone together!
one day i realize i love you like mad..
we go out on and off for over a year...
then you break up with me.
we never met,
we never kissed,
and yet i thought we would be perfect...
no heart break,
no shit,
no lies,
that one day you and me could meet and forever be.
here we are today,
you dont reply to my messages,
when i call ur busy,
we have both dealt with huge heart breaks since then.
i sit here in my computer room, waiting for a reply to just one message!
but when i check,
u never do,
u dont care anymore,
you said you loved me,
i beleived you.
i cryed for days and days when i knew you were going to dump me,
then you did,
i was right,
u didnt love me anymore...
thanks for trying,
i sure had fun,
thanks for everything.
at least now i know the bare truth,
i wont cry over you,
you wont see tears,
you wont see blood.
just me myself and i,
alone in this world,
alone in this world now
A contest entry
- Love? by isabellacohen.
550 points, ended December 29, 2008, 24 entries
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Comments
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I can hear the hurt in your words
I can hear the hurt in your words,
your voice is clear is heard and the ending is very sad to read.
Thanks for entering,
best wishes,
Isabella -
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thanks, i guess the saddest things in life inspire the best poems
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yeah, they often do
i've experienced/am experiencing great loss as well so i can relate,
warm wishes to you,
Isabella
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