.F.
.A.
.L.
.L.
.I.
.N.
.G.
drowning
in my own sea.
getting my &HOPES& up
just to let the come
~CRASHING~
down.
^SEEING^
fate.. cross the line and come back
and
*STAB*
me
_R-i_G-h_T-
Between the eYes.
//WISHING//
for something ican't very well have.
BUT
still i stay sitting here
{awaiting} that perfect moment.
KNOWING
it will never come.
:JUST:
lay here crying to myself..
fighting the inner me..
wanting to feel loved
>wanted<
and so much more.
$but $
DECIDE.
..
&NOTHING IS WORTH IT ANYMORE&
Author notes
lianna27
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A contest entry
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Comments
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WoW..
I LoVe ThIs poem..
I CaN ReLaTe..
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thanks
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so relatible. I think everyone feels this way once in a while.
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Great write. Almost everyone can relate to this feeling, and you did such a good job describing it. <3
~ToxicSuicide
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I know this feeling all too well. I can feel your frustration, lost dreams and helplessness here, I've been here don't believe in anyone or anything half the time these days.
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Its So Beautiful
This Poem is so sweet. It makes me cry...
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aww thanks so much
you sshldnt cry tho...but thank you
-lindsay xoxox
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I enjoyed this. The feelings were very visible and you wrote exactly to what you were feeling. Great job. I myself have just gotten over feeling this way, and once you get past this feeling and you have something to look forward to, its amazing. Thanks for sharing, and keep writing!
peace and love.
-B
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thanks lol i hope i get over it soon.. im tired of feeling like the world is against me and everythign i do lol.
-lindsay xoxo
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i found that sometimes yes life just feels like it isn't worth it... and it sucks so much. but pieces of you get stronger and you start to realize that almost everything is worth it. everything teaches us a lesson...or so i hear. but sweetheart you'll get better and the cards will all be in your hands
Dani♥
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aww thanks... ya idk i guess sometimes life sucks so bad and it seems like eveything is going the wrong way..but ya i know it will get better or i hope. thanks
-lindsay xoxo
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awww babe sure its worth it! all the pain in life is found to be worth it..i love you so much n it kills me to read this n kno tht ur in pain. i wish there was sumthing i could do 4 u.... good job tho i love the dirty pretty
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o babe dont let it bother you.. and sometimes i wish you were here to i miss you and love you so much thanks for being a great friend
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i miss u n love u too and np babe im always here 4 u!
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