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Roses

Roses,
In December winds,
The smell still flickers,
It still rises
Milky Way,
Filled with a creamy  surface,
It freezes,
It ices
It’s always there if you listen,
If you free yourself to the sounds
Music,
It’s always around us,
It’s around everyone right now,
We can’t see it
Dreamy Way,
Sometimes we can’t hear it’s reassurance
But just know,
I believe

It’s always around us,
In roses

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  • Rhythm Child
    December 8, 2008

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    A great entry
    thanks for taking part, wishing you luck would be an insult to your talent so take care

    message me for anything
    Billy (Rhythm Child)