A sorrowful nightmare burns into me
As your satin tongue digs through my lips
If only screams could make its way through
Slapped silent before the words could come
And fade away through the tears of deceit
Damage and feel your way through my body
As if I was a toy of your amusement
And rip off my shirt to show my naked white skin
Shiver with pleasure and cringe away the pain
Of why you would want me so much
You freeze once you get to my scars
As if you were contemplating my demise
Almost as if you were ashamed of both me and yourself
Throw away your pride as you continue further
To compromise and invade your way through me
Dig your nails into my skin and breath your way through my ear
Say those forbidden words that pains me so much to hear
You cant see my pain instead you keep going further
And force your way into me as I am finally able to scream
Pain and pleasure fill within me as you make your way through
You seem so pained and full of fear as my tears start flowing
You didn’t want to hurt me and I know you didn’t
But this assaulted rape is too much between a friend
You hesitated, but refused to stop
You want this more than enough to hurt me
Tied down to this bed of my dreams, I am unable to escape
Finally, you pull yourself out of my exposed body
And kiss me as if it would be the last time
Tears fall from your eyes as you say your sorrys
For this unexpected turn of events
You pull out a trigger as I finally realize
That the only thing left keeping you here was me
You take the gun and hold it to your head
And I scream as you pull the trigger
Just when I'm about to grab the gun I
Wake up
Author notes
Fuck, this is a reaccuring dream I keep on having. It's between me and a close friend -i refuse to say who- and it just sucks...
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ugh, i nearly choked reading this.(and thats not a bad thing, its just the emotions are somewhat overwhelming) i hope that this is only a dream and nothing more. the fear is palpable in this.
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yes
this is powerful. It punched me in the face, it's very raw and the format is awesome.This is a very good work, well done.
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Omg. That's all I can say. I am so sorry you have to live with this dream. I can feel you sorrow within this poem. I can feel your heartache. I wish I could tell you what would make it go away...but I can't...I'm so sorry.
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oh my god that is the scariest dream. beautifully written but horrible. im sorry hat this is reoccuring. if this makes you feel anybetter, supposedly dreams talk to you metaphorically, they use symbols not real things most of the time. if that makes any sense.
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Oh, my God...
Holy sh-. I'm honestly lost for words. For once in my life, it's hard to comment on it. I think, I may know who it's about, but won't comment on it....
Jesus Christ... It must be horrible to have............
Keep writing, dear.
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Horribly, beautifully, graphically dark and descriptive. Dang, this is a terrible dream to have over and over again.
Dig your nails into my skin and breath your way through my ear
Say those forbidden words that pains me so much to hear
I would change these two lines:
Dig your nails into my skin and breathe into my ear
Say those forbidden words I cringe to hear
Other than that, you've described this so well. I couldn't stop reading, ev -
good poem, horrible dream. i've always wished i wouldn't remember my dreams. so i feel for you. i hope you get some solid sleep tonight.
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UTTERLY BEAUTIFUL
wow this is crazy.
i would hate to have this dream over and over.
its a very haunting piece. almost stop me in my tracks. the ending is a bit of a shocker.
you wrote this so beautifully, you really put something so dark and painfull into a beautifull piece of poetry.
i enjoyed so much reading this, its a wonderful read! thanks so much for sharing.
your Faerie
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Damn is right...
A reoccurring dream? That must suck, having to look forward to that most nights. I'm sorry for this, but the poem was amazing. The words and imagery used is well done x
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This is so brilliantly-penned, though I know it must be creepy
After my ex left me when I was 19, I had a string of recurring rape-dreams, similar to the one you've described, and it feels really icky 
I hope that writing this helped you in some way, and that the nightmares stop as soon as possible. Well done, and best of luck to you
Bravo!
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o.o; damn~
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o.o" that bad?
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