Little gingerbread house
Cotton candy window tints
Frosting coated, doused
Red Liquorish Hints
Pretty Mint door-handles
Pretzel chocolate dreams
Marzipan door candles
Children's smiles beam!
Lovely House for Christmas day!
Butterscotch chimney and peppermint swirls
Santa will be sure to admire in his sleigh!
It's grandeur will ensure that elves Twirl!!
Author notes
I like Gingerbread houses...
A contest entry
- Xmas is for children, lets have some fun..... by AnnD.
750 points, ended December 30, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What's your first impresion?
Comments
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ooh now you are making me feel hungry.... I love gingerbread houses too and you certainly made this one so real with your words.
I made one many years ago for my children, and it was so sad to see the thing get demolished..lol
Well done and thankyou for entering itno the xmas spirit.
Ann
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your very welcome. I'm glad you liked this. I just thought I would emphasize a Christmas item that doesn't get too much attention. Dare to be different.
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This is delightfull, i would definately read it to my kids. good luck in the contest
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Why thank you! What a lovely comment!
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Lovely poem
Yes indeed the gingerbread house is truly wonderful indeed I can smell it now
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Thank you very much.
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good
a great idea for christmas
so detailed describing this object found on christmas
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yeah I was trying to get away from your canned Christmas poem
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its soo cute and entertaining
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Thank you!
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I think that this is really cute very sweet good luck to you in the contest best wishes always good luck in the contest be well.
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Thank you I hope you had a good Christmas!
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A sweet treat, I could feel the diabetes raging through my pancreas
but who cares it was such a fun tale whats an insulin shot for anyway. A clever poem that leaves a nice taste in your mouth....
Cyber Artist
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Thank you...haha I hope you don't have to take too much insulin after this! XD
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Well done
Really cute.
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The sweetest!!!
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Thanks! GINGERBREAD HOUSE WOOT!
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