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You Should Stay.........

I want you to stay, here with me,
I want to hold you, so completely,
Holding you safely, here in my arms,
Noone will ever, again, bring you harm,
I want to snuggle to you, breathing you in,
Come on baby, close the door, I want to begin,
I'll fix your bed soft, comfy and warm,
So you can rest here, away from the storm,
Leaving all the chaos of the daily grind, behind,
Here's the calmest place you'll ever find,
Come on in baby, and turn off the light,
Sit down here and be with me tonight,
We'll put some more logs, on the fire,
I'll give you whatever, your heart desires,
I'll tuck you in under your blanket,
Tonight can be whatever we make it,
I want you to know the choice is yours,
You're the sweetest guy, I do so adore,
I really, don't want you ever, to go,
You don't Have to go and I wanted you to know........
You know, I love you baby!
So, will you stay, maybe??????

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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    December 9, 2008
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    Very sweet words to convince one to stay and enjoy the night! Very warm and wonderful!

  • loki black
    December 8, 2008
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    I liked it, but the end was a bit odd