I shall spread my wings
Fly so high in pure blue sky
Owning my own heart
In a list
A contest entry
- Love? by isabellacohen.
550 points, ended December 29, 2008, 24 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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awesome
a well earned gold thingy and sound advise
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this is an unexpected take on the contest prompt but also very in touch with a truth very few believe in.
thanks for sharing this.
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glad you went with the prompt
I'm glad you went with the prompt?
I really like the title, the simplicity and flow of your poem and the last line is wonderful,
thanks for entering , it was wonderful to read,
best wishes,
Isabella
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Independence spelt out in 3 lines. Excellent.
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Beautiful
So short but such beauty lie in these short words. To be honest I think its beautiful just the way it is.
I really liked it to be true to yourself. Bravo Bravo a master piece.
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