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Ice Queen on My Window

The frost is spreading,
sending spring into the depths,
and an the Snow Queen rides her horse,
she thinks of where she is heading,
to the castle of Lord Flame,
where all there is
is guiding light melting
the land from whence she came,
and shedding her fur coat,
into her summer dress,
striding across the bridge,
which goes over a wax moat,
with her companion

Coldfrost,

but alas,

she does not exist for

she is a picture made of ice,

and Lord Flame and his castle are but a

candle lit with care.

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  • AnnD Moderators member
    December 30, 2008

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    oh this is a most beautiful picture you have created here. I really loved it. well done.
    Thankyou so much for entering into the xmas fun.

    Ann


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    December 8, 2008
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    A story with a twist a frosty picture and the Lord of the Fires this took some imagination to come up with this every time you think of something always write it down you never know when you might need it... Also the font colour against the light background makes it a little hard to read you might try darkening the font to a deep purple (cool Band lol) well done
    Cyber Artist