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Hidden Pleasures

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Yearning so badly to hold you tight,
I can’t wait for you to come tonight.
I see desire burn in you eyes,
Why don’t you step inside?


i.
passionate kisses that cover my mouth,
Pleasurable moans that sound too loud.
I grip onto you ever so tightly,
Feelings erupt, desire sets on sprightly.

ii.
We catch ourselves hyperventilating,
This yearn for release gets me frustrated.
You push me hard, we hit the wall,
You lift me high,  I savor all.

iii.
Gently you push inside,
We want each other, and that we can’t hide.
I feel you within me, a feeling so pure,
You’re my god, my dream come true.


iv.
I pull you closer and grip you tighter,
Our moans are now getting louder.
Our bodies now crumble, hotness and sweat,
Your lips gently tracing my silhouette.


v.
I scratch your back while your groan with delight,
There will be no more walls to break tonight.
I look at your eyes, I see your lust,
I kiss your lips with superior thrust.

vi.
Deeper and deeper I sink into this dark embrace,
I hope I do not get misplaced.
I am glad you’re still by my side,
Holding my hand, carrying it with pride.

Author notes

XXVampireeyesXX

Well I hope you like even though I did more than the line limit got carried away!

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  • jul
    March 23

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    Hypnotic and sensually written. Very nice job. Thank you for entering the contest. Good luck to you


  • moderndayvampire
    December 12, 2008
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    fantastic!

    this was great and heated up brilliantly towards the end..almost got me going!lol


  • Angelflower
    December 11, 2008

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    awww, this is really sweet and sensual! you did a wonderful job! I'm glad that you went over the line limit! to cut this any shorter would have truly taken away from it.. Thank you very much for sharing, I really enjoyed this.. best of luck in the contest.


    Angel


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    December 8, 2008

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    Nice job. I enjoyed the poem. I can definitely see that you got carried away as you said in your notes.

    Mike