Freedom means to me
that we get to choose
to be who we are
and no one can tell
us what to wear and
how to comb our hair.
I think it is good to have freedom
to be who you want to be
in life.
Thank you
A contest entry
- Freedom by Darkwell.
550 points, ended December 21, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful
thats the basis of freedom is in choosing who we are and nobody can ever take that freedom from us because if they force us to change even who we are stays the same but is just being manipulated anyway by somebody else. Brillient!
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this is very good Genna. good luck in the contest, -Slick
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Excellent sweetheart and very true. Freedom is so important to all of us. You certainly have a good view of it in your heart; that's a blessing. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Love Daddy -
I think that this is a good piece sweetie good luck in the contest much love to you always I send be well
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this is cute darl
love you -
Yes you are allowed to be whatever you want to be, and no one can stop you but you. Great job girly, good luck in the contest. Love you
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Well it does sound professional sweet pea. I wish you luck in the contest and many happy returns.
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