Fingers running along soft smooth skin
TEASING
Body parts awaiting that tantalizing touch
FEELING
Hands reaching around pulling two to be one
TOUCHING
Lips locked, toungues dancing, hearts beating
FASTER
Touching becomes feeling, feeling becomes natural
MIND, BODY AND SOUL
Two becomes one, inside eachother
MOVEMENT
First, insertion, then gliding, gliding becomes pushing
OVERWHELMING
Wave after wave of pushing, feelings become noises
MOANING
Soft moans become louder and she starts to come
EXHAUSTED
Labored breathing takes over after a sensual night of fun
A contest entry
- HOT, SENSUAL, EROTIC! by My Souls Reflection.
700 points, ended December 10, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very well done!
This has a nice rhythm to it, with the single words following each line. That creates a bit more fire to this erotic piece. Bravo!
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This is hot!
Sensual, yet the way that every second line jumps out at the reader makes it very erotic for me...almost as if each bold line was a deep thrust.
I like the way you crafted this piece...thank you for your entry!
Annie
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this has an excellent fire to it
strong appeal , arousing , and with class
impressive
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MOVEMENT
First, insertion, then gliding, gliding becomes pushing
OVERWHELMING
Wave after wave of pushing, feelings become noises
MOANING
Soft moans become louder and she starts to come
That'll light any girl up! Good Job! That's Hot!
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Oooooooo nice.. See you still got it :]
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