the sun is setting
the light is fading
i can barely see the brightness
its hiding behind the trees
in the dense forest - where i won't go
its been too long
too many suns have set
too many lights have faded
too many tears i've dried
and yet, I'm still waiting
waiting for the time that we can be alone
that promise we made
so dear and true
but now i think its disappearing
so you better come quick
and I'm just saying
Romeo save me
take me to a secret place
somewhere we can be together, alone, forever
don't you stay away from Juliet
Author notes
look what my boredom turns into!
well, it is probably really suckish - wrote in 3 minutes, tops
but i just had the sudden urge to post it: so here it is...
yeah, ill shut up now! 
p.s. the inspiration came from a movie we are watching in my drama class - Romeo and Juliet! haha, no duh.
'cause juliets waiting.
Comments
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so cute!!!!!!!! =)
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AWWW GIO!
Welcome back to the world of writing
Yeah, Drama is a lot of fun (even though they made Mercutio ugly
I loved him!!!! Why Gio, why?!)
But anywho (lol, funny word), this poem is great and accurately depicts Shakespeare’s Juliet.
Well done mi amiga!
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Drama is fun! We are gonna have to re-watch it now Oh, well!
As for your poem, GREAT! Poor Juliet... Ms. Amy would be pleased. This could of been used for the tomb scene. (If Juliet could see the sun and was in the tomb for days) Any who, nicely done.
Syd
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