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Vanity

delicately uttered
imaginations

words

echoed down
long, ancient hallways

breathlessly sobbing
silent tears

wounded by the ricochet

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  • Comatose--X silver member
    April 6, 2009

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    OoooOoOoOoooO.. i like it. i am not really good with the comments but you always comment me so i thought it was about time i commented you again. love the poems its AWESOME. and very powereful with itty bitty tiny sentences lol


  • WordsDoMatter
    December 9, 2008

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    Wow

    powerful words, powerful images you drew with them. I don't know what it all means to you, but that's the beauty of it, you have written a piece that everyone will draw their own interpretation to. It will mean something different to everyone. That is a very unique talent (that I dont' really possess). Well dont - Kevin