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you know who you are.

i met this guy.
he knows who he is.
the one i love to talk to.
the one that i said that if he were here with me i would love to hang out with.
the one i just met and started to be friends.
the one that i know we will be friends for ever to come.
and the one that  want to meet right infront of me.
and the one thats not like the others to me.
he may think he is the smae but to me hes the one that i like to hang out with.
the one i want to be with me forever to come.

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  • Gamefreak
    January 6

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    Good write.

    You are a wonderful writer and are great inspiration to a new writer like me. I look forward to reading more.


  • yehsung
    December 21, 2008

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    This is a sweet poem. Is it a personal poem?

    The flow of this poem is really good. Makes me want to continue reading more. Really good <3


    • kel dog
      December 21, 2008
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      thanks for the read. hope you like my others.


  • Valle
    December 7, 2008
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    aww that makes me feel so loved!!!!^_^


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    December 7, 2008

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    Quite Nice

    well this is certainly a sweetly well penned poem. I really like how you tel your friend how you feel and well also how you just let your words flow and its just a very beautiful poem. its incredible how your poem just flows and eally elts itself go and you tell your friend just how you fele and whatcha want. you're kidna taking charge and won't accept anything less. anyw ays a good write sweetie. 3 clappys

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