I dont know you very well
Sometimes your attitude is foul
You love someone true
So im telling you
I would like you as a friend
Until the very end
Of life, of death, of ever
True friends stick together
Not sure wether I like you
Or my minds playing tricks
But either way you and I could be a fix
So say hello to me
Ill sing a little tune
And we can escape to the moon
To talk on and on
Till the earth has dawn
And then go back to decide
Wether our friendship could be kept or should it hide.
^_^
A contest entry
- How you feel about me...Or think about me by BleedingScars.
450 points, ended December 13, 2008, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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HI!
oh i think this is one of your best writes. 
luved reading this one sooo much! xD
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HI! One of my best, huh? That's pretty awesome ^_^ Im glad you liked reading it!!!!!
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very sweet and innocent i like it
my favorate line
"I would like you as a friend
Until the very end
Of life, of death, of ever"
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im glad you liked that line. It was probably the one I had to think hardest about. lol!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for the comment ^_^
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LOVES IT
YOU KNOW I DO!!!!!!! IT SO SWEET
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Thanks Angel. *hugs you* I WUVS YOU
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really good......
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Thanks............
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