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He Ain't Heavy, He's My Brother !!

Because I'm made of wood,
they think I've got no feelings,
They measure my worth
not by who I am,
but whether I'm tall enough
to reach up to their ceilings,
They strip away my dignity,
fill my arms full of lights,
Then stand around me
rudely staring,
and singing
'off key ' christmas carols,
Drunkenly night
after blooming night,
Don't they realise
the damage it causes
to my family tree,
As they walk around the forest
with their axes swinging,
and laughing happily,
So, try to remember this christmas,
To be extra kind
to your christmas tree,
for it may be a relative of mine
or one of my friends mothers,
And when you carry your tree home finally
on christmas eve,
Please !! remember,
He ain't heavy,
But ! He's my brother

Author notes

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This poem was inspired by the contest & also partly by the theme of the UK Pop Group 'The Hollies' hit record, hence the title.

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  • penman gold member
    December 14, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest


    • Rose-Quartz
      December 14, 2008
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      Thankyou Penman

      Thankyou very much for the Honourable Mention for my poem. Thankyou also for the contest which I enjoyed both writing for and reading the great entries. With all my very best wishes from Rose xxx


  • maralisa silver member
    December 8, 2008
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    aw awonderful take onthe promt good luck inthecontest maralisa