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Sandwich

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I know you can understand me’
by communicating with my mind.
You liked to scared my pants off,
my first encounter with your kind.

You say your just dropping by,
and you want to be my pal.
Well I know what’s coming next,
I can hear your belly growl.

There’s nothing in the ice box,
so I’ll tell you what we’ll do.
We’ll make a peanut butter sandwich,
with a little jelly too.

We’ll start with two slices of bread,
that’s what these white things are.
Then we’ll get the  peanut butter,
from inside this little jar.

Now this is what we call a knife,
to spread the peanut butter on the bread.
And now we’ll get the jelly jar,
and do the same I said .

He took a bite and his eyes let up,
I seen he liked it by his toothy grin.
But I think he got more sandwich out,
than he got sandwich in.

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  • condor gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    Hahaha! I loved this. It would be a fun thing to have to describe to some critter from way out, how to make a sandwich. Actually, come to think of it, I have never had a peanut butter and jelly sandwich. Sounds weird! Is this real jelly you are talking about? Anyway. This was very humorous and had me laughing a lot. I loved it. The very best of luck in the contest.


  • trekkergirl
    December 10, 2008

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    now this is just what I was looking for. A steph by step detail of making a sandwich. I liked the chattering with the alien as well. Great job my friend. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it into my contest. Also just loved the picture!


  • Jesann gold member
    December 8, 2008

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    Ha ha I love it...made me laugh !!!!
    A great tale you have written with your clever wit and humour.
    Such an appropriate pic for your poem, which brought a chuckle too..just love that toothy grin!!!


  • Desire gold member
    December 7, 2008

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    OMG~~

    This is so Precious my Friend and Love the tale told also the tight rhyme!!
    Excellent!!
    I could not help but chuckle loudly~
    Loved this one!!
    The picture has me rolling

    Thank You for sharing Your Humor also Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Nicada silver member
    December 7, 2008

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    Ha! Ha! This is so hilarious! I laughed out loud sitting here all by myself. What an entertaining poem and a great step by step for making a good old PB&J sandwich. Very funny! Blessings, Patty

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