Alone
webster says its being apart from everyone,
solitary,
by onesself.
But i say it's thinking about,
dreaming about,
crying for,
dying for........... YOU.
It's regreting i ever met you
and knowing i'll never forget you
It's being sad and depressed one minute
and mad as hell the next
It's being locked up in that cold, pitch black cell of confusion and dulsuion
It's standing in the hallway in front of the back door,
where you broke my heart and killed my happiness all at once
Alone
It's the four word sentence you said to me that climate dropping, heart stopping day
HER NAME IS NICOLE.
Author notes
i hope you can relate. i tried to dig up every emotion i had buried. this poem is about broken hearts
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This is just great. Thanks for entering my contet. I wish you luck!
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YOU
i dont believe the campitals on this word were necessary, but the last line was given much more of an impact with them. You expressed emotion well.
Thanks for entering.
Laura -
The ending was epicly sad, her name is nicole? My ex is dating a nicole, I'm glad i'm over him. But this poem is very very good.
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"Alone
It's the four word sentence you said to me that climate dropping, heart stopping day"
I love how you describes the "textbook" definition and then webbed off into a deeper meaning of the word
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OMG wow this poem describes a very painful emotion. Very great write!
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nice
wow i have the same feelings towards my ex thank you for this.
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Whoa!!!
this is venting if ever I heard it!! I've been there too my friend and it is not heaven!!
SilverButterfly
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