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The Book!




Book compiled over many years
through The Creator’s inspiration,
filled with command and many exhortations!

Genesis to Revelation
this book it’s replete,
with the history of man,
many of his defeats!

Manual given man,
not only to the Jew!
If we’d heed all that’s scribed
in sin we’d not abide!



Words: K.Botka
12/7/08

Author notes

2Ti 3:16 All scripture is given by inspiration of Elohim, and is profitable for doctrine, for reproof, for correction, for instruction in righteousness:

I only just got started with my inspiration about His Book & before you knew it I was already over 90 words! I had to spend a lot of time trimming & counting to get to 50 words exactly! Hope I did a worthy work in only 50 words.....

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  • thepoetssoul
    January 25

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    This is wonderfully spiritual, holding exellent thought.
    Spoke with thruth and honesty, well done indeed.
    Best to you in all you ever do.

    Tony


  • Polaja Greeters member
    December 13, 2008

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    Thank you so much for entering my contest with this poem this has an interesting rhyme scheme - I like that you have written such a devotional poem in response to the prompt

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • Harlequin Dance
    December 7, 2008

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    I'm going to guess first without reading the poem and say it's the Bible.

    Yep, I was right. Not a bad poem, but I feel all the exclamation marks aren't needed.


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    December 7, 2008
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    This is a beautiful write about the Words of Life that have been graciously given to All mankind for our benefit. How you could limit your write to 50 words on such an inexhaustable subject is amazing in itself. Thanks for sharing these truthful and wise words my friend.

    Brother Dennis


  • SilverButterfly gold member
    December 7, 2008

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    excellent!!!

    this is just amazing work you did on this write!! I doubly applaud you for a job well done!! I love it.

    SilverButterfly


    • Kathleen a Nazarene
      December 7, 2008
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      Thanks!

      I no sooner posted this & there was your comment! That's a beautiful Butterfly you've got there! I love butterflies! This was a bit of a struggle getting something I'm so passionate about into 50 words, so I appreciate your words so much!

      • SilverButterfly gold member
        December 7, 2008
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        well then we have something in common because I love them too!! and your poem is outstanding!!!

        SilverButterfly

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