looking at that girl in the distance
no sparkle in her eyes
no shine in her smile
her soul is bare.
she hides behind her loneiness
no one cares about her
i feel her pain
i see her sorrow.
Then i realize
I'm looking into the mirror
i know why i see and feel everything she feels
that girl is me.
tell me what you think
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I like the feel of this poem. Very emotional.
Great write! -
awwe this is really good writing! one that I wish I'd written!!!
SilverButterfly
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