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My Truest Love

My truest love with sky blue eyes and clever wit
who’s hardly ever free
There’s a place in my heart that belongs to you
even on those rare occasions when I wish you could be evicted
You remain
embedded there through time
& the turbulence of life that we have shared and survived together
I love you
Like I have never loved before
You are a part of who I am
My love for you is not bound by this life time
We are beyond the realms of this physical reality
deeper than flesh and blood
lighter than the air we breath

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  • Yemassee gold member
    December 7, 2008

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    Rough draft duly noted.

    The feelings you mention are wonderful, its been a while since I've felt that way, but I have a good memory...well...a memory anyway. And your feeling ring loud and clear in this poem. May the feeling be forever mutual!