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Asylum For Conflicted Thoughts

 

 

 

I find myself lost in unfamiliar territory,

as my thoughts crash hard against my mind.

So many worries, concerns, and doubts linger.

I wonder what it will take to overcome them all.

 

Through the years I have learned a great lesson.

Procrastination is something that should never be considered.

It only causes more problems and confusion in the long run.

It makes it harder to conquer your goals and move on.

 

I have found it easier to get things done right away,

and leave my worries far behind me.

I have placed all of my anger and frustrations,

in a place that I call my "Asylum For Conflicted Thoughts."

 

With them locked away I find more tranquility,

and peace of mind in my daily life.

I now look at my present as a precious gift,

and ponder my future with an open mind.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Username: Jeremy0826
Prompt: 'Asylum For Conflicted Thoughts'

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Comments

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  • Glasyalabolas
    December 16, 2008

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    This is a great message, well written that many of us (myself included) could and should learn from.

    Good write.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 13, 2008

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    my friend this is one of your best i mean this is something, i know i loved it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Angel Felice Seals
    December 9, 2008

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    Bravo

    such a powerful piece a master piece full of emotion and pasion heart felt. You have great talent the flow was nice as well keep it flowing


  • Desire gold member
    December 7, 2008

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    Wow~

    Powerful piece You have penned my Friend and Your words grab at Spirit~ Bravo!!
    Love how You took the prompt to a whole new level~
    Excellent!

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • hotchocolate gold member
    December 7, 2008

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    This is great here hon! Your write goes so well with your prompt and I like it Good luck to you in the contest


  • Glasyalabolas
    December 7, 2008
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    I'm sorry, someone just reserved the last slot (No.23) literally two minutes before you.

    I could add another one for you (No.31) if you wish?

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