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A Witness


Tear drops, this tear drops
Salty, these teary drops
Departing in haste,
the cliff of your eye
like a child running; withdrawing
from the heat of a fire, his hands.

Withdrawing back fast,
a shocked scarred heart, taken aback
like lush green spring- frozen as ice
in but a split second
this blow that you'd get
(I knew)
this blow that you got today.

Departed forever.
Dreams shatter, passions freeze, love halts.
And life breathes...
                              a stop.

And just like that,
the warmth of a candle becomes something else
the rose that's red becomes something else

And before begins this endless wait,
I see your heart
charring white, as tears gush
on your icy cheeks...




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Its my best friend having the worst time.

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  • wattle silver member
    December 10, 2008

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    Oh my, pain expressed on a queen of heart background. --- I'm hoping we are just writing discoveries associated with the bounds of intellect. Moods of beauty in Ms Me Prose. ---- Thank you.