Hollow...
the echo of emptiness rattles cages.
A glitch in one's everday ordinary,
it causes sensory overload
shaping every other word meaningless
every thought in between depleats...
Always in search to fill a void,
drifting towards the wrong elements
ingredients will always be miscalculated
and the end, a deadly combination.
Author notes
The tragedy of life is what dies in the hearts and souls of people while they live.
Albert Einstein
A contest entry
- 8 to 10 great lines - Quote Inspired by Kiddy.
600 points, ended December 12, 2008, 21 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Ooh what a quote by Einstein, and you have written yours very well....Thought provoking!
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There you are!
Thanks Rose for your valued input on this!
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A grand and understanding picture of severe depression. Maybe that's why poetry is such good therapy, always seems to open up internal gates and fills one back up again. Write on!
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Thank you Siderea for taking the time to leave such well valued words about this piece...it's fascinating to uncover different point of views
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That is true! One never knows what spectcles a reader will wear . Always makes me choose my words carefully....
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