I swayed gently with confusion on my heels,
I saw how slowly you began to disappear.
No words could make you stay,
There was a heavy reason, you had to walk away.
I thought things would never change until I met you,
But now that you’re gone, I don’t know what to do.
I’ll miss you greatly, I’ll miss you so,
Oh why, oh why did you have to go?
I caught a glimpse at the pictures you left behind,
All those moments, such great times.
I miss your laughter, I miss our tears;
These memories will live throughout the years.
It hurts me so to see you take your plane,
You waved goodbye, a smile I had to feign.
I loved you madly and you never knew,
I would’ve done anything just for you.
Now I’m sitting here next to the phone,
Hoping you will call and decide to come back home.
I know I’m just dreaming, you won’t be here,
After this fight, you won’t want me near.
I have loved you since we became friends,
Oh why, oh why does this story has to end?
You found someone you believe is true,
But what will it take you…? If you only knew…
I saw you three months later, you look so bright
I hadn’t notice you had someone, holding you tight.
You saw me and ran towards me to say hi,
But it only felt like you had said goodbye.
I made my way out of your hands,
This pain I couldn’t take back.
Rain began to pour,
And my heart began to sore.
I still cry your goodbye,
But you’ll never know the reason why.
Oh why, oh why did you have to go?
I should’ve told you how much I loved you so.
Author notes
Title was inspired by Rascal Flatts
picture found in Deviantart.com and belongs to lostpixels
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A contest entry
- Crying by She Stole My Voice.
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You broke my heart with rhis one.
What a lovely poem So well done!!!!
Stunned I am
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aww sorry to hear that... thank you I am glad you liked it!
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good job and good luck
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Agreed with "She Stole My Voice"; I'm not a fan of cliche rhyme but you pulled it off pretty well. There were only 1 or 2 spots where I felt were a bit awkward. It's sad, love that turns grey and fades for one person but not the other. You articulate this predicament very well; good job!
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I love that song :]
And usually I thoroughly detest rhyming, but this is really good. It doesn't sound forced at all.
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what a helluva write my hot sweet Puerto Rician sweetay ( sorry I like being bad soemtimes with some nicknames cuz you kno me ) any ways what a helluva incredible poem this was, I am not into the group you heard a song and based this write off of but this was quite a well penned neatly done poem. the picture really adds more life to the poem but over all this was one incredible write. keep up the good work as always ans good luck your fun lovin Tiger friend
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This is an incredible poem. I like it alot. The depth of emotion in this poem is amazing. I think it is a great poem from start to finish.
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