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December Song



Seven minutes to December,
dabbling with raspberry tarts
and feeling bonhomous

He makes me dance

when there is no music
he is my mantra
our conversations are the lyrics
spoken freely,
woven giddily into sweet trust, with
no shadow of lust for any other
unlike his hands,
the thought has not touched me
living as I do, every day
just to make him smile

His music fills me with such a rush
like warm honey crumpets in my belly

Tomorrow,

we will take photos of everything,

except perhaps

the pie we stuck our fingers in


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 




December Song
İcrisstiena

Author notes

A poem of true love in 20 lines

Image by ~Silverwolf90@deviantART

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  • zt
    September 23

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    Ah...zis iz what amour iz all about, mes ami. Iz about nuzzings and zumzings and evryzings. I zalute ju and zis mahvelous poem!


  • Balldinger silver member
    December 7, 2008

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    brushed with grace, elegance and a certain disarmament. who can not be enamored with a piece of pie like that?


  • Quiet places
    December 7, 2008

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    Excellent

    A very descriptive poem of the love for another and the shared emotions that are so strong. Great imagery. Don