Dancing with the female
the one who has one eye
stitched shut so perfectly
I didn’t ask her why
There’s tracks on her arms
that wrap around my head
black lipstick upon her mouth
as I devour her in this bed
Sanctuary drifts in wonder
till the sword unsheathes within
in all your melancholy orgasms
none could be in realms of sin
Darkness in it’s shadow
shall flood away the day
in picture perfect nudity
that shall define my loving way
Increments of splendor
shine like stars in the night
as the needle cries for fulfillment
just before the morning light
Author notes
Picture Prompt
A contest entry
- Dancing In The Halls of Insanity.... by RareFlower.
625 points, ended December 11, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very moving poem.
Great rhyme and flowing rhythm. I felt sorrow for the woman in the story and you stirred the emotions well.
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Wow. You did an excellent job with the prompt. I had to go look at the picture, and it made me want to join, too. LOL.
But this was a fantastic...dance.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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beautifully poised
The lines were eloquent and flowed deliciously...
full of dark spender and magnificence.
Loved the line' As I devour her in this bed...'' so tempting...Good luck and thankyou for a great write!
dark blessings,
RF
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You're welcome, she is a very fine lady and deserves more than she has recieved.
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