There's a certain beauty
Unseen by the naked eye
It is only felt,
from waves of emotion
that flutter like
the rich ruby red
of first autumn.
They rest softly in awe
at the feet of
unparalleled dignity and grace
which transcends any physical form.
A vault of hope opens
as nature's pearl
in all its unassuming elegance,
inspires one's soul
to rest within its lustre.
The strains of life
become crushed to dust
and none are immune
from the wings of honour
that intrinsically enfold
and soothe
the most weary of spirits
in genuine palpitations
of liberty.
Author notes
3) Finish the poem (2 options)
Extra Rule: must use what I have as part of the poem; preferably the beginning.
[]There's a certain beauty
Unseen by the naked eye
It is only felt
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- Options For Those In Search Of Something New #2 by kitsmith.
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Comments
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Great take on what I had. Beautifully written.
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Wow, I am with my Hawk brother below. With just a wow, it is all I am left with here. Another stunner from a very talented quill. Best to you in the contest
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Another thought provoking write.
The last stanza just had me at... wooow okay...
Anyway well done
All the best to you in the contest
Ken
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Wonderful
So very creative and well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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